i luv it do you have more stories like this
I'm sorry, but this story did not do Interlude any justice at all. For two thirds of it, all you did was re-hash every line of dialogue from the english dub. And the sex was pointless fluffy smut that didn't develop their relationship or the plot at all.
Interlude was not canon. It dealt with the possibility of a forbidden sexual relationship between Serena and Darien. I wish you had explored more of the complexities and obstacles to their new relationship. Instead, you gave us fluff and smut.
kool cant wait to read more on this.
i love this story! i always read it whenever i masturbate in the evening!
Oh that was SO cute. I loved every bit of this story, and I was on the edge of my seat throughout it. Well done. I loved the maturity of it as well, you made it flow nicely and believably. *nods*
i really liked ur story:)
u made it go along really well with interlude:)