I loved this! I have no idea why people didn't like the author notes. It really helped to make the story. It was almost like a sports commentator finally talking about a "sport" that everyone would like. Your notes throughout helped me really get into the story, it was almost like watching a movie while it was being made. Keep up the great work! Can't wait to read your other stories!
personally i loved the authoris notes in the middle of the story. i found them hysterical. if this story was meant to be a comedy and get a few laughs it defiantly did its job.
Okay, probably you won´t check up your comments after a couple of years BUT it was really fun to read it!
I totally was lying on the ground laughing when the author gave the comments; so funny!
And I love the joke about the pill... could´ve really seen Usagi´s grin ^^
SO, please, write on girl and produce more stories like it!
Greetz from Germany