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Reviewer: alex Anonymous Date: Feb 10 2009 07:11 AM Title: Calm Before the Storm

yay that was cute :)

Reviewer: violintides Anonymous Date: Jan 29 2007 07:16 PM Title: Calm Before the Storm

That was a nice little story, but it was honestly very rushed.  I think this could have been a GREAT story if you'd gone more into detail at certain parts.  Especially where it's just like "silver crystal power showers the Earth in pink light and BAM there's a crystal palace."  Just trying to leave something for you to think about doing next time... Description brings out an image in someone's head, and that makes the story as if it were a movie playing inside your head!  Think about that next time!  :)

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