OMG, Will you please finish a story for once they are really good.*_*
yeah at least try and use english correctly god damn well beyoung that its good bt ive read better
it was wonder ful
ok sorry but I have 2 say wats with all of the 'youkai and miko' crap?!
can't u just say 'demon and priestess' instead cause it gets really annoying the rest of the story is in plain english!
anyways that's what I have 2 say the story line is good and stuff but if ur gona write a fanfic in english make sure all of the words r in proper english too!
I loooove it!!